Monday, August 13, 2018

It's Pitch Wars Wish List Time!

Hello, Pitch Wars hopefuls! If you’ve arrived at this page without visiting my co-mentor, Sarah Cannon’s blog first, please head on over there to find out why you want us as your mentors! Because you really, really do! :D

All set? Excited? Wondering what the heck we’re hoping to find in our inboxes? I just happen to have that info for you.

Our Wish List
Both Sarah and I are voracious readers and read quite widely. So we’re open to most genres, styles and flavors of MG.

But there are a few things we’d really, really love to see in our inbox:

Fantasy with a new twist!
We'd love to see the diversification of fantasy that's been happening in YA trickle down to MG even more. Or high fantasy with counternarratives, such as the sly and witty feminism in MISS ELLICOTT'S SCHOOL FOR THE MAGICALLY MINDED, or the matter-of-course LGBT family in THE TEA DRAGON SOCIETY. Give us wild and weird new worlds, like THE LAMPLIGHTER CHRONICLES for MG or THE GIRL WHO DRANK THE MOON. We'd also enjoy fun romps like THE STORY THIEVES books or THE LEAGUE OF BEASTLY DREADFULS.

Sarah writes Contemporary Fantasy (If you haven't read ODDITY you absolutely should, it's fabulous), so it's no surprise that genre is high on our wish list! We'd love to see American fantasy through new and underrepresented lenses: think ARU SHAH, THE SERPENT'S SECRET, MOON GIRL AND DEVIL DINOSAUR, and MS. MARVEL. We love dark, creepy, and funny, sometimes all at once! Give us a MG with a NIGHTLIGHTS or LUMBERJANES vibe.

(We're mentioning a few graphic novels, but that's because they're often great indicators of up-and-coming must-read lit rather than because we specifically want graphic novels. Alas, while we love to read them, we're not the right fit to mentor them.)

Yeah, we said it! Don't be afraid to send us your broken worlds and eerie futures. Sarah recently read a gorgeous dystopian called A WHISPER OF HORSES and adored it!

We both have a soft-spot for a good retelling, whether it's a literary retelling, myth, folklore, or real-life events told through a different lens. THE GRAVEYARD BOOK (which is a reboot of THE JUNGLE BOOK) is a particular favorite for both of us.

Science Fiction
Someone please bring us your version of DRAGON PEARL so we have something to read until it comes out? Or send us something like HOLLY FARB AND THE PRINCESS OF THE GALAXY which is as tongue-in-cheek as Douglas Adams.

Such a broad spectrum of books in this genre but particular faves for the two of us include: COUNTING BY 7s, THE FIRST RULE OF PUNK, THE STARS BENEATH OUR FEET, FINDING PERFECT, and THE ETHAN I WAS BEFORE. They're very different books, but they share important qualities: unique, nuanced characters telling stories only they could tell.

Animal Narrators

When done well, books with animal narrators can be amazing. For example, the main character in THE DRAGON WITH A CHOCOLATE HEART is a dragon who's turned into a girl. Viewing the world of the story through her dragonish lens is part of what makes that book so original and fun! Another animal main character done well is Casseomae the bear from THE PRINCE WHO FELL FROM THE SKY, by John Claude Bemis. In this case, an animal MC puts a cool spin on what would otherwise be a pretty standard MG dystopian. What we're saying here is that an animal-driven narrative would have to have serious hook to get our attention...but we also wouldn't want to miss it.

Give us the kind of book that makes you keep all the lights on, the sort that puts goosebumps on your goosebumps. We love a good ghost story and one of JC's all-time fave series is LOCKWOOD & CO. by Jonathan Stroud.

Give us twisty tales that keep us guessing and pit your characters against foes determined to keep them in the dark. Particular favorites include the ENOLA HOLMES series by Nancy Springer. (JC has a serious Sherlock obsession.)

Whether it's more recent eras like THE CARE AND FEEDING OF A PET BLACK HOLE, INSIDE OUT AND BACK AGAIN, and AHIMSA, or distant times like THE INQUISITOR'S TALE or THE TRAGICALLY TRUE ADVENTURES OF KIT DONOVAN, we want to be swept away to different times, especially if it's with characters and cultures that aren't commonly seen in historicals to-date.

The list above isn't exhaustive, we just wanted to give you a taste of some of the books and genres we love. There are really two things we're looking for: number one is voice, voice, voice! It really is such a critical part of any story, and MG voice is hard to nail! Second, original ideas and world building (yes, even contemporary novels have world-building.)

What we’re NOT looking for:
  • Anything other than Middle Grade. Sarah and I can only mentor MG as part of Pitch Wars and we don’t want you to waste one of your precious entries, no matter how amazing your book is, on a manuscript we can’t touch. 
  • Books dealing with drugs/alcohol abuse 
  • Books about eating disorders 
  • Books that promote hate speech or views 
  • Books that feature gratuitous violence against animals 
  • Books about sexual abuse 
  • Books written by our CPs, betas, friends, past or current mentees. You’ve already got a shortcut to our inbox and opinions :) 
  • Anything that is poorly written or with a ton of grammar, spelling and punctuation mistakes. We don't expect your book to be perfect (if it is, you shouldn't be entering PW anyway; go sub that thing!) but we do expect that you've taken the time to make sure it's not riddled with mistakes that make us feel like we're reading something Google translate just spit out. This is a deal breaker.

What you can expect if we pick you as our mentee:
You will work your butt off. There will be homework. We'll do a broad pass on your manuscript, as well as detailed line edits. We’ll also work together as a team to polish your query and pitch so they are shiny and bright and ready for the agent round. Our critique style is very, very thorough and your manuscript will bleed red with comments, corrections and suggestions when we are done, so if you can’t take constructive criticism, we may not be the mentors for you. We're not ogres! We will cheer you on and talk you through the hard bits. But you really do need to come into this ready to work hard on that manuscript (we certainly will) with an open mind.

Our mentee will have the final say on all changes. We will never ask you to alter your manuscript in ways you aren’t comfortable with. But choosing a mentee isn't about finding a manuscript that's already perfect. It's about loving a story and having a clear vision for how to make sure agents and editors can see what we see. We shall not waver in the face of grammar shenanigans! We shall not crumble under snail-like pacing and info-dump moments! We will persevere and we will win this war!*

*We define winning as helping you revise your book to a place where you’re happy with it. The agent round and requests are a happy benefit, but not the whole point. However if you get a million requests, heck yeah we're going to throw a virtual party!

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Friday, February 9, 2018

Adding Fanfiction to Your Writing Tool Belt

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Pick a fandom, any fandom, and there’s probably a community of fanfic writers and readers camped out there and having fun.  For those that haven’t heard the term before, fanfic is short for fan fiction and refers to written stories of any length inspired by books, movies, video games, television programs, music and/or celebrities. That’s a broad spectrum of fiction and the internet is riddled with it.

But why would an author writing original fiction want to consider reading and writing fanfiction as well?  Fanfic is actually a useful tool you can add to your arsenal. There are two broad areas where fanfic is useful: first as a creative catalyst and second as a research tool.

Fanfic And Creativity

Almost every writer has had moments when you hit a wall on your work-in-progress. Call it writer’s block, call it brain fog, call it a momentary blip in your creative genius. Either way – the words aren’t flowing the way you’d like them too. Fanfiction can be a great way to take a break, but still flex those writing muscles.

Pick a fandom you love, or even better, one your target readers also love, and write a flash fiction piece. Write a short story. Have fun! Indulge every ship, every pairing, every dramatic or romantic or ridiculous thought and potentiality that you like. Write until you’re smiling so big your cheeks hurt. Then take a step back and read over your work. What about it makes you happy? Yes there are characters and worlds that you love in there, but beyond that – what themes do you see? What situations? Would any of those work in your original writing?

You can use fanfic as just a break, a chance to blow off creative steam. Or you can use it to find what sparks might reignite your passion for your own work-in-progress. Either way, if you’re having fun, it’s worth every moment. Just make sure you do get back to that work-in-progress before too long!

Fanfic As Research

As of this article, An Archive of Our Own (one of the largest and most active fanfiction communities online) has close to 25,000 fandoms represented, over 115,000 users and over 300,000 works posted. More are added every day. That’s a lot of information in one place and if you know who your target readers are and the fandoms that appeal to them, it’s a great way to get a peek inside what they’re passionate about!

Head over, pick any fandom you like, and sort the results by the most popular. Look for common themes. Go read the comments on a few of the most popular pieces – what are the readers saying? What are they most fired up about? What storylines seem to get the most interest? Why? What do you think makes those stories stand out (beyond good writing)? Read a few fanfic pieces and see if they spark any ideas for your own work.

Whether you use fanfic as a way to shake off the writing-blahs or as a jumping off point for your next big idea – it’s definitely worth having a look!

Tuesday, October 3, 2017

YA Scavenger Hunt: Orange You Having Fun?

Welcome to my stop on the Fall 2017 YA Scavenger Hunt! I'm here representing Team Orange. Let's hear it for the least rhymed vegetable and most overlooked color in fashion! Orange doesn't get as much love as it should, in general, but if you check out the amazing authors I'm lucky to share some blog space with, I think it's clear which color is the clear winner in this year's scavenger hunt:

Never heard of the YA Scavenger Hunt? YASH is a bi-annual event originally organized by author Colleen Houck as a way to give readers access to exclusive bonus material from their favorite authors...and a chance to win some awesome prizes!

There are seven contests going on simultaneously, and you can enter one or all! For the Orange Team contest, one lucky winner will win 20 different books from the Orange Team authors! But don't forget, there are six other teams and you can visit all of them for a chance to win a whole different set of books from each.

If you'd like to find out more about the hunt, see links to all the authors participating, and see the full list of prizes up for grabs, go to the YA Scavenger Hunt page.


Directions: Below, you'll notice that I've hidden my favorite number. Hint, it's in orange. Collect the favorite numbers of all the authors on the Orange Team, and then add them up. 

Entry Form: Once you've added up all the numbers, make sure you fill out the form here to officially qualify for the grand prize. Only entries that have the correct number will qualify.

Rules: Open internationally, anyone below the age of 18 should have a parent or guardian's permission to enter. To be eligible for the grand prize, you must submit the completed entry form by Sunday October 8th, at noon Pacific Time. Entries sent without the correct number or without contact information will not be considered.


But YASH isn't just about winning books (although that is pretty awesome). I'm pleased to welcome Larissa C. Hardesty to my blog today! 

Larissa Hardesty is a Young Adult author of speculative fiction. Having lived a fairytale when she met her husband while on vacation at Disney World as a high school senior, all of her stories have at least a touch of romance. When she’s not writing, she can be found pursuing her passion for music as an elementary music teacher and handbell choir director. She lives in Central Florida with her husband and three children.

Larissa's novel, KISS ME, KILL YOU came out in June and sounds as intriguing as its gorgeous cover.
Emmy Duivel believes in true love: heart-stopping kisses, candlelight dinners, and a connection that lasts forever. But not the kind of kisses that land your date in the hospital. Emmy always knew she was different, but not in the supernatural sense. Not in the succubus sense.

Paul Andinn had only one job: watch over Emmy and make sure she doesn’t expose the supernatural world. It should have been easy, but the moment he looked away, she kissed that boy, and everything changed.

He should be more upset. But he can’t. Not when he’s falling hard for her.
To find out more about Larissa, visit her website or follow her on Twitter and Facebook. Add KISS ME, KILL YOU on GoodReads and pick up a copy at Entangled Teen.

I'm so thrilled I get to share an exclusive for KISS ME, KILL YOU with you! Larissa put together the following playlist especially for the book; make sure to click the KMKY image below so you can listen to the playlist on YouTube. I heard a rumor there were 7 more songs, but they're being suppressed by the supernatural world as they give too much away! Here's what Larissa has to say:

Thanks so much for hosting me, J.C.! I listen to very long playlists when I write, and I tend to get hooked on certain artists for each book. While writing KISS ME, KILL YOU, I was listening to a lot of Evanescence, Avril Lavigne, and Maroon 5. For me, it's more about feel than words, since I'm not really listening to the words. But there are a couple in here where the words really fit the story. Those may have been replayed more than the others. LOL. If you have any suggestions for my next playlist, I would love to hear them!

Don't forget to enter the contest for a chance to win a ton of books by me, Larissa, and many more!


To keep going on your quest, you need to check out the next author! Head on over to Sherry Ficklin's page for your next secret number and even more exclusive content.